Saturday, January 12, 2008

Project Drafts 1&2

Intro Paragraph:

During World War II to the time period of the late 20th century the evolution of the concepts including; personal freedom, individual responsibility, and respect for human dignity, had a growth. In many domestic events that took place during WWII these concepts were clearly stated. Within the Civil Rights movement, many of the key events, goals, and origins also demonstrated the evolution of personal freedom, individual responsibility, and respect for human dignity. The growth of each concept was also portrayed in the course of the women's rights movement, in the 1960s and 1970s, and the social trends (and sometimes the economic trends) of the late 20th century.
*Basic introduction- much more work is needed for the final draft. I have yet to come up with a strong thesis to tie everything together yet.

Body Paragraph 1: 2 pts. (maybe 3)

*Expanding the Military

-all out war-needed more than 5 million volunteers -> drafts. (individual responsibility.)

-military work force needed greatly

-Formation of Women's Auxiliary Army Corps (WAAC) because things could be done better by women. (respect for human dignity)

-few benefits granted to men (although, one bad thing that affected human dignity)

-Women's Army Corps-got rid of Auxiliary.

-Women-> nurses, ambulance drivers, radio operators, electricians, and pilots. (individual responsibility&respect for human dignity-maybe personal freedom?)

Labor Contribution

-defense contractors warned Social Securites Service that nation didn't have enough workers for military & industrial needs-wrong.

-led to drafts & were now 18 millio workers helping with war based products (ind. responsibility)

-6 mil. were women-> they proved they could work

-women could use welding torches, riveting guns, etc. ledding to many women hired (ind. responsibility, respect for human dignity, and personal freedom) although, earned only 60% as men- bad factor.

-more than 2 mil. minority workers were hired.

Body Paragraph 2: 3-4 pts.

*The Segregation System (ex.School-Crisis at Little Rock)

-court and state decisions severly limited African American rights.

-"equal but seperate for white and colored races"

-Jim Crow laws-> aim to seperate races (african americans and white people couldnt get married)

-religion was affected, schools, cars, waiting rooms, train cars, elevators, witness stands, and bathrooms.

-aviod racism->people moved north, abandoned farms and took part in industrial lives in cities.

-racism and segregation in north too, led to violence sometimes.

*A lot of this material was a huge event from WWII to the late 20th century, but not everything was an exact positive growth?*

*Boycotting Segregation(Rosa Parks)

-Rosa Parks= key person ->refused to move while on a bus for a white person (personal freedom)

-inspired whole community to join her in defeating segregation (human dignity)

-Arrest led to bus boycott. (human dignity and personal freedom)

*Kings Death ( Martin Luther Kings affect)

-MLK led Montgomery Improvement Assiciation once buses were boycotted (individual responsibility)

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Body Paragraph 3: 3 pts.

*A New Womens Movement Arises

The Movement Experiences Gains & Losses

The Movement Legacy

Body Paragraph 4: 4-5 pts.

Carter and Civil Rights (bridge to Civil Rights Movement paragraph)

Ford Tries to "Whip" Inflation

Advancing Human Rights

The Moral Majority

Conclusion Paragraph:

Thesis statement has not formed yet from my drafts.

1 comment:

Justin Scott said...

Good work Nikki! You've got the ideas down, and you're clearly showing how the theme corresponds to your topics. Now, take it to another level - mix in the photos with your writing instead of keeping them separate. See what you can do by Wednesday to move to the next level!